Rewrite a note with ASD-STE100-inspired language
Type: kb/types/instruction.md
Experimental. Use this instruction only with an explicit note path. It is inspired by ASD-STE100; it is not a compliance procedure.
Rewrite
- Read the note, its collection's
COLLECTION.md, and its type specification. - Rewrite the prose with these preferences:
- Give each sentence one main point.
- Prefer short, direct sentences and active voice.
- When splitting, restate any definition, condition, qualification, cause, contrast, or appositive relation carried by the original syntax.
- Keep items in a list grammatically parallel.
- Name the actor when the actor matters.
- Use one term consistently for one concept.
- Make necessary logical connections explicit.
- Preserve the note's claim, reasoning, evidence, scope, frontmatter, title, headings, links, code, quotations, and registered identifiers. If a preference would change the meaning, preserve the original wording.
- Run
commonplace-validate <note-path>. - Append departures, observed effects, and new ideas to
kb/reports/asd-ste100-inspired-rewrite.md.
Verify
- Compare every split with the original. Check definitional force, modifier attachment, shared qualifiers, appositive identity, logical connections, and list parallelism.
- Read the complete diff for lost qualifiers, changed causal direction, or broadened or narrowed scope.
- Confirm that validation passes.